Re: "Whenever you fall" for review please

handrick · Post by **handrick** » Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:43 pm

Hey,for what its worth...I think you could do without the intro and just go straight into the verse... sounds a bit disjointed to me....best of luck with it...Andrew

kontakt · Post by **kontakt** » Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:04 am

I can't download the mp3. The server seems to be down.

aubreyz · Post by **aubreyz** » Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:55 pm

Quote:a shameless little bump for a possible feedback.emusic,First thing I would say is that you need to have someone who is more comfortable with English really go over these lyrics. There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that are dead giveaways.Melodically, I don't really get much lift, release-- kind of static and not a clear resolve, but I wouldn't really listen to my opinion on this... kind of out of my genre.Aub