Bet you thought I'd never post!

[bobbydazzler]

So I signed up in November last year... told everyone my grand plan... THEN NOTHING!!! Laptop got stolen along with all my music.. then that annoying thing called a job got in the way... but now I'm ready!I'm keen for some opinions on my songs.In each case I'm not looking for feedback on production (that can come later). I'm more interested in your opinions on lyric content and whether you feel the songs themselves are good enough to submit to Taxi.My Reason Why Sunday MorningsForever OneYou can hear them all on my Broadjam Page. www.broadjam.com/danhaeslerThanks in advance guys and girls!

[bobbydazzler]

ok so no-one cares about my life story...maybe you could rip apart my songs?www.broadjam.com/danhaeslerI intend to mainly submit to TV/Film listings... Peace

[ddusty]

ok, so i will make this my first post. (have to start somewhere) this is all IMHO, so take with a grain of salt.I think you have a good basis here. The most common theme of most of my returns is that the hooks are not strong enough. These songs may fall into the same category.I like the bridge in Sunday Morning, breaks it up a bit.My main suggestion would be to flush out the chorus' a little bit. make them stand out from the rest of the song a little more.Personally, I like lyrics that don't spell everything out to the listener, leave somethings to interpretation. Unfortunately most screeners do not agree with me Otherwise, keep up the good work. It's a long road (even if you take a taxi!)Rob

[bobbydazzler]

Cheers Rob, I appreciate you taking the time. I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff.BD