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Post by bennettsongs » Tue May 29, 2007 5:59 am

I'm Bennett from Austin and it is my pleasure to join everyone here. Of course, I'd appreciate your feedback on my music. At your convenience, please check out my songs on my Taxi site - www.taxi.com/bennettsongs - and/or my personal site - www.bennettsongs.com.Thanx ahead of time!BB

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Post by hummingbird » Tue May 29, 2007 8:17 pm

Hey BB, welcome aboard. I listened to Another Time. I thought the song was quite lovely. Perhaps the mix could use a little work - I'm not an expert, but it seems almost too busy sometimes & your vocals seem a little covered. I'm not sure if it needs all that. I think you could do less musically and have more impact. In other words, IMO the song is sort of overproduced. The intro is also too long, I'd get to the vocals sooner. Nice work. Look forward to hearing more from you,cheersHummin'bird
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Post by apjc10 » Tue May 29, 2007 11:02 pm

I just listened to "Another Time" as well. It's good. I think it could be a something special if it was just acoustic and a very intimate vocal. The strings and everything are beautiful but I think it could be really powerful if it were simpler. Just one man's opinion...sounds good though.God bless

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