new song i think i got it right this time

[stickinsound]

hi all , we just posted a new song and would love to hear everyones opinions on it. like it or love it honesty is always the best policy , hope you enjoy it , but if not , thats o.k as well . happy listening and thanx for your time.the song is titled "Release Me"http://www.broadjam.com/artists/artist. ... stID=39427

[mhoffman]

Helloooo stick...,Okay, here's my on-the-fly review. The instruments need more panning to the side to give the vocals more space in the middle. The drums were very hard to pick out at the beginning. Perhaps part of the panning issue. The vocals are great. The harmonies may be more distinct with panning. The phased effect on the call-response vocal is a bit much and distracts. Perhaps just a level adjustment there. The lead guitar is great. I like your feel you've put into it. At about 3:20 I'd like to hear more a more dynamic drum change-up to accentuate the return to your chorus. Okay, song's over. Wow, that was great. Reminds me of Bon Jovi and Tesla. Your voice is great. Is it just you doing all the parts? If so, great job. Thanks for sharing this. Recording sound is great. You may concider giving the acoustic guitar more body in the mids and lows. -Matthew

[stickinsound]

thanx matt that was all the tune in its rough stages. just to see if i was on the right track with it. i will post the final mix once all the edits are done. thanx for the compliments and for the listen. i will get back to work on it tonight im sure. thanx again , your far to kind ........