Need some help!

[billg]

I tried to take Michael's advice on the "spend a couple of hours & create something" advice. Creating everything with just guitar and bass presents a challenge and although I knocked out three tracks in several hours over the last two days I have no idea what genre they would fall into (or if they're of any use at all!). I'm including a link to the two that have been activated on Broadjam, I'm waaay outside of my usual "box" so please take a listen & let me know if I'm on the right track (or right train!).Here's the link, thanks - billghttp://www.broadjam.com/transmit/transmi....0066&yhgbndsq=2

[gitarrero]

hey bill,I just listened and found the second one "game..." not bad. however I would suggest to put some more dynamic in the tracks - that keeps them interesting in the ear of the listener.

[liamkelly]

BillYou're on the right train but maybe the wrong carriage. Hooks are too simple, ordinary and repetitive. Sorry, just being honest. My stuff's at www.liamkellylive.com . You can slam it any time you want. I'll man up - not going to hide behind a computer.Liam