Do you agree with this return?

[Casey H]

This is the first time I've ever publicly posted unhappiness with a return. So to be fair, I'll post the listing, the full critique, and the song and ask you out there to tell me what you think. The screener said it was right on target, good broadcast quality, and other positive things but thought the hook needed some development.The song: "I Don't Need Nobody Else" at www.taxi.com/caseyhThe listing:ROOTS LEANING INDIE ROCK SONGS are sought by a Los Angeles-based music publisher who has signed dozens of TAXI songs/writers and has been successful in securing film and television placements. He is looking specifically for Indie Rock songs that can fit into the Alt Country and Americana format. Examples they give range from College radio acts such as Fleet Foxes, Ben Iver, Okkerville River and Blitzen Trapper to acts with proven track records like The Old 97's, Butch Walker, The Shins, Ryan Adams, The Jayhawks and Uncle Tupelo to Classic acts such as Gram Parsons, The Byrds and Buffalo Springfield. Performances must be excellent and recordings need to be Broadcast Quality - great home recordings should be just fine. He splits the license fee with you 50/50 and doesn't take any publishing - it's a non-exclusive deal. Please submit one to three songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened and critiqued by TAXI and must be received no later than Tuesday, April 21, 2009. TAXI #S090421IRThe critique: www.caseysongs.com/S090421IR_TAXI.doc I didn't post lyrics here because they weren't mentioned in the review, but I can upon request.So, what do you think? Be honest, fair, and objective. Casey