Need help with Listing Please

[renips]

I need some feedback for the listing below. I have a song called SHINE which in short is about a girl who goes out "West" to be a star and comes full circle. Even though I do not mention Hollywood, LA or California does anyone feel that I would be completely off target for this listing? You can hear the song SHINE with this link http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.p ... rkspinnerI would appreciate feedbackTAXI # Y091117RKORIGINAL ROCK SONGS WITH VOCALS THAT ARE ABOUT "HOLLYWOOD", "LOS ANGELES" or "CALIFORNIA" sought by a successful Music Publisher who has secured tons of great Film/TV placements for many TAXI members. All styles from Classic to Contemporary in Rock are welcome. Male and/or female vocals are OK. Songs must be originals - NO COVERS. Great songwriting with solid performances are a must. Broadcast Quality is needed (great home recordings are fine). They offer a non-exclusive, 50/50 split deal - you keep your original copyrights. We originally ran this as Dispatch listing #D090919CA, so if you submitted to that listing, please send in new material this time around. Please submit one to three songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened on a YES/NO BASIS ONLY - NO CRITIQUES FROM TAXI - and must be received no later than Tuesday, November 17, 2009.

[Casey H]

Nov 11, 2009, 8:32am, renips wrote:I need some feedback for the listing below. I have a song called SHINE which in short is about a girl who goes out "West" to be a star and comes full circle. Even though I do not mention Hollywood, LA or California does anyone feel that I would be completely off target for this listing? You can hear the song SHINE with this link http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.p ... rkspinnerI would appreciate feedbackTAXI # Y091117RKORIGINAL ROCK SONGS WITH VOCALS THAT ARE ABOUT "HOLLYWOOD", "LOS ANGELES" or "CALIFORNIA" sought by a successful Music Publisher who has secured tons of great Film/TV placements for many TAXI members. All styles from Classic to Contemporary in Rock are welcome. Male and/or female vocals are OK. Songs must be originals - NO COVERS. Great songwriting with solid performances are a must. Broadcast Quality is needed (great home recordings are fine). They offer a non-exclusive, 50/50 split deal - you keep your original copyrights. We originally ran this as Dispatch listing #D090919CA, so if you submitted to that listing, please send in new material this time around. Please submit one to three songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened on a YES/NO BASIS ONLY - NO CRITIQUES FROM TAXI - and must be received no later than Tuesday, November 17, 2009.Hi RenipsWhen a listing asks for "songs about" something like a city, that item has to appear prominently in the lyrics- usually in the chorus/hook. So, this would not be a fit for this listing. Very cool rock song, though! I like your voice! A little bit Stevie Winwood like! Best, Casey

[renips]

Nov 11, 2009, 10:59am, hurowitz wrote:Nov 11, 2009, 8:32am, renips wrote:I need some feedback for the listing below. I have a song called SHINE which in short is about a girl who goes out "West" to be a star and comes full circle. Even though I do not mention Hollywood, LA or California does anyone feel that I would be completely off target for this listing? You can hear the song SHINE with this link http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.p ... rkspinnerI would appreciate feedbackTAXI # Y091117RKORIGINAL ROCK SONGS WITH VOCALS THAT ARE ABOUT "HOLLYWOOD", "LOS ANGELES" or "CALIFORNIA" sought by a successful Music Publisher who has secured tons of great Film/TV placements for many TAXI members. All styles from Classic to Contemporary in Rock are welcome. Male and/or female vocals are OK. Songs must be originals - NO COVERS. Great songwriting with solid performances are a must. Broadcast Quality is needed (great home recordings are fine). They offer a non-exclusive, 50/50 split deal - you keep your original copyrights. We originally ran this as Dispatch listing #D090919CA, so if you submitted to that listing, please send in new material this time around. Please submit one to three songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened on a YES/NO BASIS ONLY - NO CRITIQUES FROM TAXI - and must be received no later than Tuesday, November 17, 2009.Hi RenipsWhen a listing asks for "songs about" something like a city, that item has to appear prominently in the lyrics- usually in the chorus/hook. So, this would not be a fit for this listing. Very cool rock song, though! I like your voice! A little bit Stevie Winwood like! Best, CaseyThanks for the advice Casey. I appreciate itMark

[quadri]

Hi Mark, cool rock song! I really like the chorus part.CiaoAlberto

[renips]

Nov 12, 2009, 2:24am, quadri wrote:Hi Mark, cool rock song! I really like the chorus part.CiaoAlbertoThanks for listening Alberto. I am glad you enjoyed itMark