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Re: Ok, who wants to help me with these lyrics?

Post by lwj001 » Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:51 pm

No, RanG. It would be Lake Houston, the mud hole where we get our drinking water from!
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Re: Ok, who wants to help me with these lyrics?

Post by edteja » Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:32 am

Hello toncart. Tell all these know-it-alls to jump in the lake. Go with your heart feelings. Actually, I like the "older style".Certainly go with your feelings. I don't think anyone suggested otherwise. But after saying that, lwj001, you have suggested he change the lyrics to those you approve of.... what gives? We know-it-alls would like to know.
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Re: Ok, who wants to help me with these lyrics?

Post by pogodog » Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:12 pm

Quote:No, RanG. It would be Lake Houston, the mud hole where we get our drinking water from!Turning mud into water?... Even Jesus knew his limitations.

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Re: Ok, who wants to help me with these lyrics?

Post by lwj001 » Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:06 am

http://www.pic-a-pagediscounts.com/Real ... .htmlHowdy, Traveling Ed Teja. I noticed that everyone offered suggestions, but no firm examples, so I wanted to offer my version for consideration. He said, "I specialize in writing "weak" lyrics ". I didn't think they were weak; very good as a matter of fact. How about you doing a rewrite of the stanza as well? Then maybe I'll be the one who has to jump in the lake. Oh yeah, about turning mud into water, no- we just drink the mud.
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Re: Ok, who wants to help me with these lyrics?

Post by walter327 » Wed Dec 13, 2006 9:41 am

Hey, Ton.An idea on the next line for your opinion."'Cause your warm arms call out to meto linger for a whileI look in your eyes and I know I'm not leavingtonight"Holler back,Walter327
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