'May All Roads Lead to Cali" reviews welcomed

[jchitty]

Hi, I just joined recently, and I've been finding these forums helpful. I write folk and country songs. If anyone would like to critique my song.... reviews would be welcomed. MAY ALL ROADS LEAD TO CALIMy fingers did the keyboard danceIn building 63I wanted more so I set down rootsWhere the goldrush met the dreamI loaded up my minivanAnd set out to the westNow my days are filled with grape lined hillsAnd I'm feeling at my best(chorus)All the pickers and the grinnersThe good and the sinnersMay all roads lead to CaliThe restless spirits and the rebelsThe angels and the devilsMay all roads lead to CaliI'm driving down the highwayWith the wind tossing my hairSo glad that I can be in a placeWhere I can throw away all caresLet the surf and sand play my rhythmAnd the wine glass train my gripThe California life is waitingIf you wanna take a sip(chorus)All the pickers and the grinnersThe good and the sinnersMay all roads lead to CaliThe two left feet and the dancersOffice workers and free lancersMay all roads lead to CaliOh, may all roads lead to Calicopyright 2006, j. chitty