ORIGINAL *Dont You* Let me know what you think :)

[lou80]

Hey Everyone!!!This is my song called Dont You, I would love you to give me feedback on the lyrics and song itselfHere's the link to listenhttp://au.youtube.com/watch?v=AI-JyxEMzZoDont YouIt's time you found your way aroundPush through the waves that keep you downThe little lies that let you drownThat keep your face towards the groundThe fear inside, the price it costThe things you wished and things you lostThe ones youve blamed the ones youve crossedThat doubt that lives and bleeds in most of us.ChorusDont you wanna walk above those wallsInstead of hiding outInstead of closing doorsDont you wanna live for something moreThan a dream that falls through those handsthat stallYou know the lies youve heard the causeThe words misread that start all warsYour mums, your dads, your friends words tooIgnoring whats inside of youAnd all the while you feel the painOf living someone elses gameYouve made yourself one sturdy nooseYouve built your worth on what they thinkof youChorusDont you wanna walk above those wallsInstead of hiding outInstead of closing doorsDont you wanna live for something moreThan a dream that falls through those handsthat stallThey say lifes for livingBut you just waste it dreaming awayThey say thats lifes for living...babySo why waste it dreaming away..ChorusDont you wanna walk above those wallsInstead of hiding outInstead of closing doorsDont you wanna live for something moreThan a dream that falls through those handsthat stallCopyright 2007 Louise D'Arcy