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[ephlat666]

Here's a few of my songs:www.myspace.com/dongreenmusicFeedback welcome!!!

[dgolding]

Here's my 2 centsWatch You Go - Not a bad song at all. I'd like to hear some BV's in there to give it a lift. Maybe some kind of lead instrument too for accents. The timing of the drums vs the guitar seems to be at odds at bit during the chorus, and the drums could use some variation. Not keen on the guitar sound.Limousine - Guitar sound again is not to my taste. It reminds me of an early fuzz box. Song has potential again tho, bounces along nicely.All Night Long - There's that guitar sound again. Too much reverb on the vocal for my taste. Like the song tho.Stand Up - Chalk and cheese to the first three. You have an interesting voice, and I don't think it needs the effects on it, such as the chorus. Piano is nice, guitar is too loud. Again, song has potential.Overall - I think these songs would sound 100% better with different arrangements. The guitar sound is pretty rough, the drums need to be more dynamic, and some backing vocals would give more light and shade.I hope i'm not giving you the impression that I don't like the songs, or your performance. I'm just looking at it from the perspective of how I would produce it.

[ephlat666]

Exactly the type of feedback I was hoping for. Thanks for the suggestions and the nice compliments as well!