Sooooo close - but no fwd. Country lyricist needed

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Re: Sooooo close - but no fwd. Country lyricist ne

Post by littlestfly » Tue Dec 02, 2008 1:01 pm

Hey CK we never spoke before but I saw your lyrics and wanted to give you a version of mine. I was not able to hear the music but I tried to stay on yours as much as I could. I can rework this more if you like it I just took a few minutes to throw this together let me knowwhat you think I did'nt have time to work on bridge sorry.......Craig LittleYou don't seem to see me anymore ©2007 CK Barlow[Verse 1]Like the rising sun fills the morning skiesI was everything beautiful and new in your eyesOh, the way you looked, the way I staredEven in a crowd you were lost in my glareI'm not sure where we lost our wayWe've gone from sunny, to a cold cloudy day[Chorus]Just close your eyesAnd open your heartThis is where the evening endsAnd where the ? new morning startsIf love is blindWhat are we looking for?Should I just walk away (should i even be here)If you don't see me anymore[Verse 2]A worn down door, a torn porch screenAnd just a few short steps that lie in betweenBut if I reach out to touchWould it be too much?Would I blow like a breezeThough leafless autumn trees

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