"Lots of potential, reconsider chorus"

[stephencampbell]

Got some excellent comments on this track from Taxi reviewers, apparently lyrics are great, verses/bridge are great, feedback was that the Chorus needs work, to be bigger/punchier, maybe some different chords, different notes in the chorus melody. Am hoping a co-writer can bring something amazing to the track...you can hear it at http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.php?userid=15592 (Good Boy...)

[unsygnedhype]

hey stephenlisten to the tune...sounded great...dunno if i can pick-up on the read but i believe i could add a little something to the tune...i think your right when you say it has "lots of potentiallet me knowmack - mr.bizznessman@gmail.comcould you send the lyrics as well?