Please review my song "There We Go" Pop/Rock

[Amirah Ali]

Dear TAXI Forum Members

My name is Amirah Ali and I would like to share with you my song "There We Go" (3:17) Pop/Rock.

It is for TV and Film as well as for teen pop artists.

I can imagine it being used at Tv Sitcoms eg. "I'll Be There For You" for FRIENDS.

I have inserted the lyrics below for your easy convenience. Please listen to it at my TAXI profile page.

http://www.taxi.com/amirahali

For your own interest my personal website is: http://www.amirahali.com
You can add me on facebook, myspace and twitter from my website.

Thank you everyone.

Regards,
Amirah Ali


There We Go


There We Go

Searching high and low over these mountain tops
Everywhere I go I feel like screaming out loud
How great it’ll be when it’s you and me
We will conquer these life’s uncertainties

Day by day I wonder what this life will hold
But one thing’s for sure that it is filled with hope
I know that you feel this love with me
And forever we will be free, and

Chorus

There we go, there we go, being so young and free
Oh there you go, there you go, it’s our destiny
Together we will be so happy
All you’ll ever need is just you and me

There we go, there we go, being so young and free
Oh there we go, there we go, it’s our destiny
I know that you feel this love with me
All you’ll ever need is just you and me

Verse 3

Every time when life gets rough - just count on me
There is no where in this wide world I’d rather be
Through ups and downs I’ll be by your side
And my love for you will never subside

All our dreams unfold beyond our very eyes
All we need to do is hold on to it tight
Believe in us and we will succeed
Just believe in love and we will be, oh

Chorus

[ottlukk]

Amirah!
I clicked on your link, and listened to the tune, and thought it nicely done. You have a beautiful voice, and the production was first rate. However (to state the obvious) the link brought me to a different song; it was in a language I don't understand, so I can't comment on the lyrics.
I'll make a suggestion. Include a link to your Taxi page for this song. There are people on this site as computer illiterate as I am, and don't have a clue as to how to access songs posted on your Taxi page. If you have this song posted on another music site, please post the link as well.
At any rate, welcome to the forums. You sound great!
Ott

[Amirah Ali]

I apologize about the inconvenience. I am new here and I thought there would be a link at my name to my TAXI homepage. I just figured out the link and added it in. Thank you so much for notifying me about it.

Btw the Malay song at www.amirahali.com do have English translation to the lyrics. It is on the Bio page.

For your easy convenience, I have added it here:

TELL ME

Each passing day I seek
And yet I am unsure
For a thousand nights I dream
And still my doubt endures

Am I but a name
Mere colour of my skin
Am I just my faith beholden to my race
Am I tradition, blood of a nation
Am I thought, an act, intention

Oh God
Tell me
Oh God
Tell me

Each passing day I gaze
Upon this ornamented world
For a thousand nights I count
The stars that bind my heart

All the world contained
Within a grain of sand
Life's merest whisper
Encompasses the firmament

Deep beneath the tide
Secrets still abide
An ancient heritage endures
Perilous and ever fair

[DorothyWallace]

I love it.

I think you are correct that it could be a tv theme. This sound isn't so popular right now, but it comes back all the time. You are very talented.

Dorothy

[jnmorrison]

This is a very cool track.
Professionally recorded/written/produced!
First rate!

I was thinking of Dawson's Creek when I heard this.
Don't forget about thinking about submitting this for labels/publishers or even reps looking for new/young/fresh
COUNTRY artists/songs!
The production is just this side of rock/country.
Awesome stuff!

cheers,
Nick

P.S. - gimme a call if you need a touring guitarist!

[jefflaplante]

This is the best produced song that I have heard on the forums...sounds so professional. This would fit very nicely into a Hannah Montana / High School Mucical type of project. You will def. have success with this one. There is actually some listings on TAXI right now that this would be perfect for. Good luck!

[marcblack30]

This is the best produced song that I have heard on the forums...sounds so professional. This would fit very nicely into a Hannah Montana / High School Mucical type of project. You will def. have success with this one. There is actually some listings on TAXI right now that this would be perfect for. Good luck!

I have to agree with Jeff, this is a great sounding song/recording and you shouldn't have any trouble getting this placed!
Definitely felt the Hannah/HSM vibe.

Great job and best of luck!

[ottlukk]

Amirah!
Very nicely done! This is a Disney Channel type of song, only a lot better. People beyond their teenage years would enjoy it!
Ott