looking forward for your feedback

[reymac]

I posted before, but did not put my profile link, just wanted to test the waters, I'm fairly new to taxi, and about to renew for my second year,and just discover all this cool forums. I don't sing at all so I had some friemds do the singing for me.
www.taxi.com/reymac

[deantaylor]

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Hey reymac,

Welcome to the forum.

I listened to ... Cuando Estas Aqui

I can't judge the lyric .. don't speak the language. But the song has great musical structure, great separation of bridge and chorus. Excellent chorus lift. Nice work. Tight. Got to the hook quickly .. that's good. Good hook. Very enjoyable to listen to.

I don't know the genre, but if the lyric were in English, the 'sound' seems to be Adult Contemp Pop.

I don't have the ear to help with production/mix issues.

Dean

PS In the future, this forum works best if you post 1 song at a time. Tell us your goal for the song .. film-tv or pitching to an artist or ..... Post the lyric. Ask some specific questions, if you want. Also, get around and review other people's songs and you will get more feedback on yours (in general, over time, may not always work the first time or every time)

[rkat]

I took a listen to the second track. I don't know the language as well.

Production wise, the instruments seem far away ... maybe in a large room or too much reverbm mainly the guitars I am talking about. Vocal tracks sounds good even though I don't understand them.

[reymac]

Thank you guys, I really appreciate your comments. Hey Dean I listened to some of your stuff, man let me tell you got some killer tracks, congratulations!!!