Dear friends of music, I need your help with my new song!

[ottlukk]

Timbre:
Forget the comment about the left pan. My jack wasn't all the way into my computer.
Ott

[TimbreStar]

I like the song a lot. I think your vocals are good. Why do you think you're not a vocalist?
Dorothy

Dear Dorothy after your nice comment I might consider singing more, I'm happy that you liked it, THANK YOU!
Your voice is beautiful too All the best...

[TimbreStar]

Intro too long. Done by too many people.WOrds been done before. Don't write music for someone to be sorry for you. A lot of overtones of things that generally hit the reject pile. Need to make things much bolder. Grandsoul
http://www.youbloom.com/web/luciusaustin

Thank you for your feedback. I'm thinking either to add some vocals to the intro part so it does not feel long or I might shorten it.. Everyone uses the same words it's just how they come together and what it says is different so I do not totally agree with you on that one.. Yes I know lot of elements that makes the song muddy, I'm working on it. Lastly, it may need backvocals to rise the chorus even more and more rhythmic elements and live instruments to make it bolder. What made you feel sorry for me?

[TimbreStar]

Timbre: When I clicked your link, I kept on waiting for the song to play. Took me a couple of minutes to notice the little box I had to click on; not familiar with this site. First of all, the intro, at 34 seconds, is too long. Secondly, at least on my computer, everything came through on my left earpiece. Third, I had trouble hearing the lyrics, they need to be more up front.Liked it, though. Nice vibe and groove, and the lyrics i was able to hear, I liked. The rap type of sequence near the end was a nice variation. Ott

Happy to hear that you've fixed it now. Did that fix the problem with the vocals not being heard?
Thank you Ott for your feedback, I've listened to your songs and I enjoyed listening to them also. All the best

TimbreStar
http://www.TimbreStar.com

[feaker66]

Hi

Just wanted you to know I tried you site and it just kept loading, loading.................

paul

[TimbreStar]

Hi Just wanted you to know I tried you site and it just kept loading, loading................. paul

Hello Paul thank you for letting me know it happened to me before so I know what you mean let's hope the reason is lot of visitors visited my page more than it could handle )) When this happens all I do is simply refresh the page and than its ok. Have a wonderful day!

[jefflaplante]

I absolutely LOVED this song. It sounds so professional. Well written, performed, mixed, and mastered. Ridiculously good, IMO. I would love to work with you on a couple of tracks. Let me know if you are interested. Your voice is really cool...kinda reminded me of and 80s style singer ala Tears For Fears or something...and that is a very good thing to my ears. And Yes, I would pay for this song, and I am usually very picky. I just really really dug this song a lot!

-Jeff

[TimbreStar]

I absolutely LOVED this song. It sounds so professional. Well written, performed, mixed, and mastered. Ridiculously good, IMO. I would love to work with you on a couple of tracks. Let me know if you are interested. Your voice is really cool...kinda reminded me of and 80s style singer ala Tears For Fears or something...and that is a very good thing to my ears. And Yes, I would pay for this song, and I am usually very picky. I just really really dug this song a lot! -Jeff

Heyyy Jeff, I absolutely LOVED your message It's filled with your positive energy which made me very happy! I would love to collaborate also, I'm open to any ideas, here is the link for what I'll be happy to do http://www.timbrestar.com/TimbreStar/Soundeclipse.html . Please let me know what would you like to do? The song still needs a lot of work though but at least it's on the beautiful grounds... THANKS eternally!

[ottlukk]

Timbre:
It sounded way better. First time around, it was like having one ear plugged, all my fault. Nicely done.
Ott

[TimbreStar]

Timbre: It sounded way better. First time around, it was like having one ear plugged, all my fault. Nicely done. Ott

Thank you Ott!