brand new at this...looking 4 some1 to help with my lyrics

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I have been writing poems/lyrics for about 3 yrs now, since i have been out of jail/prison, of trouble.... have been clean for that amount of time as well...its a new life for me and has been very difficult and strange... lol i have about 80 or so poems/lyrics/songs that i need some help on... most all of them are about my life in the past as a bad, and i mean very bad person... i used and sold drugs for about 23 yrs, collected money for some hard hitters for about 3 of those yrs so i have seen so pretty messed up stuff... i have some good material to work with, and have no idea where to go or what to do because they just dont seem finished.. a little chorus or something i believe.... so if there is any1 that can help or at least guide me in the right way i would truly appreciate it..... thanks all for the time..... can email me at danddsebring@yahoo.com

David Sebring

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How about posting one that's pretty good right here and we'll take a look? Do you play any instruments of hear a melody in your head that you could sing? Developing a song takes quite a bit of work, just so you know.