country song - welcome to the country

[acoustix]

thanks for the help guys!

[bucyboy]

Hi Adam. The music track is smokin' hot. The vocals need some work. They're not selling the song. Needs a lot more attitude and ummph. The song itself has possibilities. This is just my opinion.

Buc

[acoustix]

thanks . i agree with you on the vocals.. i just recorded those in a closet. guess im worried about bothering the neighbors

[acoustix]

thanks for all the welcomes! bumping this one for feedbacks on the lyrics. please!

[remoteoutofcontrol]

Nice soundtrack Adam, I enjoyed the overall "vibe" of the song. I can hear it in the back ground of a romantic comedy movie.

Some lyrics didn't feel comfortable though. In verse one, the girl seemed a little too young to be hopping into a stranger's car. Maybe if she were a little more independent - with no reference to her daddy - it wud be better. I just felt too much of a gap between the age of the girl and the guy.

Everything else seemed just fine except for one line in the bridge: "Freak out about a little snow," sounds like the guy's starting to ramble. Other than that, I liked the song.

Ken

[rfrey]

Welcome to the forum Adam!

I like this song a lot. The only thing I could possibly provide for any input would be, at first the chorus didn't jump out at me. As I listened to it again I got it. I'm not sure what it is though so I'm no help! Maybe its just an arrangement/production thing. Anyone else feel that or is it just me?

Rich