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Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by rafferty » Fri May 21, 2010 11:22 pm

Hi friends, I'm looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot called Je T'aime. I'd love to know your thoughts.

http://www.reverbnation.com/#/rafferty

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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by fusilierb » Sat May 22, 2010 1:54 am

Not sure what specifically you wanted to hear. But it was cool. Definitely felt like a "Spot". I really like the sound. Wish the bass drum was more in your face and got louder as it worked it's way to the end.
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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by rfrey » Sat May 22, 2010 6:47 am

This is really cool. I love the vocal effect with the mix. I agree that maybe experimenting with some more on the low end might be interesting. Is this for a specific listing?

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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by rafferty » Sun May 23, 2010 7:33 pm

A BIG THANK YOU GENTS! I agree with both of you. I love seeing my music through new ears...I'm on it, and I'll post an updated spot shortly to see what you think.

BTW: I enjoyed both of your music sites, and look forward to hearing more...

Rafferty

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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by jnmorrison » Sun May 23, 2010 9:10 pm

Yeah, very cool for a ringtone, I could see my wife downloading that one!

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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by rafferty » Fri May 28, 2010 11:28 am

Mr. Morrison, that is a fantastic idea! You could download it and use it for her number only so that when she calls you the words translated into English are "I love you, I need you." Hubba, hubba. Let me know if your wife likes it :D

Thank you for your input. I've put Je T'aime in the editing line up. I appreciate everyone's input and have enjoyed listening to the creative genii of T.A.X.I.

Hope y'all have a beautiful weekend.

Rafferty

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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by bwd » Sat May 29, 2010 2:47 am

Hi Rafferty, Cool stuff. This sounds like the intro to a big dance track - the stuff they play at the gym. Nice voice. I think you have to carry on and write the rest of the song! Doug

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Post by rafferty » Sat May 29, 2010 6:40 pm

Doug, thank you for your words...I admit I hadn't thought of it in terms of a full song. I'm accepting the challenge...

I really enjoyed your music! That Children of Africa track really resonated with me. Keep it up...


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Post by ottlukk » Sat May 29, 2010 9:14 pm

Ms. Rafferty:
I liked this so much, I also listened to "Danny Boy" and "Every Part of Me". Geezzz, you have a really sweet voice. I further want to compliment you on having the courage to put your version of "Danny Boy" on your Reverb site. A classic song, not remotely connected to contemporary music tastes. Though, if wasn't a classic and written before, you'd be instantly famous. And you pulled it off, beautifully. Love your voice!
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Re: Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

Post by bwd » Sun May 30, 2010 4:23 am

Hi Rafferty. Thanks for listening to the music at my homepage. Glad you enjoyed "Children of Africa" - a song about the many orphans in Africa as a result of the AIDS pandemic. I also listened to the other songs at your site. You've got something special going there - just be careful with the amount of reverb. I look forward to hearing your finished song! Doug

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