Listener ID # 256 - "Waiting For My Angel" review.

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Listener ID # 256 - "Waiting For My Angel" review.

Post by ljade4 » Sun May 30, 2010 3:55 pm

First I'd like to say thank you for such a thorough review of my song. I took note of what you said, especially regarding the lyrics. I originally wrote the lyrics to the chorus for my wife before we were engaged while I was waiting for her to come home one day. I never looked at the song from an outside point of view because I knew what the words meant to me. I didn't realize that to someone else they might not work. I took your suggestion and changed them up to make the chorus more clear and concise. I added shakers to the chorus to give it a little more drive without losing the feel. I normally do write the last verse as some sort of resolve but this time I opted not to. I agree that in most cases (99.9%) that resolution is called for but in this case...she always keeps me waiting. :) Finally I have been learning the production ends of things...trimming ends and cleaning things up...a little bit of effects here and there. Put some delay on the lead guitar. Anyway, I hope you get a chance to listen again. Thank you for such a good constructive review. Thank you listener #256!

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