Can I get a Second Opinion

[BenEvolence]

Recently submitted 2 songs to the following and was returned for Stylistically Off Target. Anyone willing to listen to the songs and let me know if you agree with Screener #312 and perhaps give me some insight what I might have done to be more on target?


CONTEMPORARY R&B/SOUL SONGWRITER/PRODUCER a la India Arie, and piano oriented Alicia Keys, etc., needed by an Executive producer of a movie soundtrack looking to collaborate. This producer is looking for a songwriter/producer with their own studio, the ability to write instrumental tracks, arrange, and produce their own material. Tracks need to be acoustic, earthy, organic, with a live instrumentation feel. Please don’t submit instrumentals that are to over produced or synthesized. Instrumentals only please!

The 2 songs can be heard here under the titles Alicia's Neo-Soul Shuffle & Night Mayer on Strat Street:
http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/songs.php?userid=32797

Thanks

[Len911]

You don't have the correct link. it should be something like www.taximusic.com/benevolence or something, not hosting/songs.?php...

[bwd]

Hi. I also checked the link given above. You can't play the songs from that page. Cheers, Doug