Looking for some input on this 30 sec. spot

[dannydep]

Hi Rafferty,
Only thing that came to mind was that I would have liked to have heard the first two vocal bits at the front.
They were a bit too quiet.
I should point out that I am a bit deaf so if this was not a problem for others please disregard.
ciao, Dan

[monteverdejon]

Following on from Dan's note, you do have a very good voice for this electronic type of stuff, I would turn it up! If you haven't already, try playing the track on a cell phone to make sure you can hear your voice...

[MatthewMoss]

Hello, IMHO I felt like this was a longer piece that you cut the middle and end off of. Which I guess you have to know what you are pitching for that might be exactly what they want. The first thing that Came to mind though was intro.
For an intro I loved it! But what the hell do I know

[rafferty]

Thanks for listening, Doug. I appreciate your input on the reverb thing and will take it into serious consideration. I look forward to hearing more of your work.

Rafferty

[ottlukk]

Liked it a lot. lovely voice.
Ott