Thanks to screener#255

[fret17]

Just a thanks to you for your comments and helpful suggestions. I felt you were actually generous with your marks as I expected lower marks especially in the production aspects of the submission, and received high marks for melody and lyric....Since this was my first submission that included critiques I wanted to get a feel for your gage on what's expected and now have a clearer understanding...hopefully future submissions will reflect a noticable improvement.