my music

[gojarooni]

I am interested in what you guys think of my music. Any feedback is welcome. http://www.promofm.com/herzlos
Thanks for your time.

[ottlukk]

I took the time to listen, and at the same time read your "bio". You need a new writer. I am always turned off by a third person telling me how great a first person is. Though, there were possibilities in your tune.
Ott

[glender]

You worked with a member of AC/DC? That's pretty cool. I always thought they should do a reality TV show about Angus Young. I'd love to see what his life is like away from the music. What does he do when he's just hanging out? What goes on inside the mind of a person that turns out that kind of music. The guy's fascinating IMO.

BTW the opening instrumental on your site sounded good.

[mojobone]

I listened to Bone In My Finger; first song that came up in the player. It has the earmarks for ambient; creates an atmosphere using only a few elements, and features a healthy dose of repetition to create a hypnotic effect, which is spoiled by a couple of rhythmically challenged moments on the drum kit, late in the song. As for the blurb, I thought the resume paragraph was well-enough done; the descriptive portions were where it really started to deviate from standard English-I'd leave 'em off in favor of a very short blurb about genre and letting the music and graphics speak for themselves.

[gojarooni]

Thanks guys! Good input. Yeah my bio was written by this A&R company I signed with. I'm a better writer but I was working three jobs at the time and figured they would get it right. It's like grade school grammar. Haha. I tried to take it off the site, but I don't have the admin code or whatever. I use Jamstix for my drums so it lacks the natural feel sometimes. I'm thinking of posting edited songs as well cuz some are 8 minutes long and the pay off break down parts take a minute to get to. Thanks for the ideas! Anymore feedback is welcome!