Feed back on a song or two

[lyric123]

Would someone who has placed a song or two be willing to give some feed back on a couple of songs on my website http://theheartoftheflame.com you pick any song. They vary in genre.

[Mellow D]

Hi Lyric 123,

I listened to Push and shove. I like the vocal and cool vibe to the song. I found the verses a bit muddy in terms of the vocal being sloghtly muffled in the mix. I would perhaps strip back the verse a little.

I like the with your love chant on it that definitely works,

I has a reggaee/phil Collins mixture.

I think this one could be a very good song just needs some tweeks.

hope this is useful feedback.

Mellow