I Want My Virginity Back! Reviewer 238

[ottlukk]

Ott,
This song needs to be cleverly written so that it makes perfect sense. How is she supposed to get her virginity back so she can give it away again. I don't particularly understand why she's searching in the car and on the sofa for something. I almost wish she would find it so I could see what it looks like LOL!

The style of the music doesn't fit the listing, (as mentioned earlier).
Well mr.or ms reviewer: you may be right about the style, but you have absolutely no understanding of irony. You"don't understand "why she's searching in the car and on the sofa for something"?!!!! The "something" is her virginity, and if you had listened to the lyrics, she's not searching for it, she's telling her ex lover to look there. Because (universal thought, duh), ladies lose their virginity on sofas and on the back seats of cars, and bedrooms . . . and "how is she supposed to get her virginity back'? Can't believe you even asked the question. She wants it back so she can have the pleasure of losing it again.
I've had bunches of returns on this song, but even so got compliments on the lyrics. You're the first reviewer to tell me the lyrics have to "make perfect sense". They do, if you bother to listen. And if you have a sense of irony. Congrats! Of all the returns I'e got, yours has ticked me off the most. By the way, this song won an honorable mention in the 2009 GASC contst. Ott

[kitchensinkmusic]

too funny Ott....If I we're you I'd keep tweaking this tune....it is a very clever idea and maybe the reviewer is right that it doesn't quite all come together.

A successful song writer once told me (and I'm sure he didn't make this up - meaning he was quoting someone else)
"What you say and how you say it are indistinguishable".

Best of Lukk and I really enjoyed the track.

[ottlukk]

Richard:
Thanks for the kind words! I probably shouldn't have gotten so worked up about the review. Virtually all the other returns I've gotten on this song complimented me on the lyrics, so I got a bit defensive. Will continue working on getting it placed somewhere.
Ott

[fret17]

Hey Ott...Scarry huh....don't worry...you keep pluggin away with this great song...a million people may not get it...but there's also a million who will...

[ottlukk]

Tom:
"Great song"!!!! Love it, my ego is getting all better! Thanks!
Ott