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Another oily oily submission!!!

Post by Satish » Wed Mar 02, 2011 11:19 am

Hi folks, I'm Satish here from India. I'm brand new at Taxi and my first submission was for the oil company jingle called Om Shanti. I took a slightly more electronic/orchestral approach to the arrangement. Your critiques will be invaluable in me finding some direction here at Taxi. So please feel free with both positives and negatives. Cheers, Satish/.. :D http://www.taxi.com/satish

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Post by rld » Wed Mar 02, 2011 8:08 pm

Hi Satish,
You don't have any songs on your page.
It may be that you didn't check the "make it public" option?...or something else.

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Post by Satish » Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:49 pm

:? Sorry rookie mistake! Fixed it now. Please listen to it u guys. Thanks for letting me know rld. Cheers, Satish/..

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Post by cardell » Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:59 am

Welcome Satish,

I enjoyed that :)
but...I found the static sound at the start quite distracting. It sounds like it is intentional but to me it sounds bad.

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Post by psbelote » Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:22 am

Satish, this is another great entry for this listing. Including mine, I've heard 5 differet entries on the forum for this listing. Good luck. A lot of competetion on the oil ad here.
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Post by singer1 » Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:24 am

Hey Satish, I really like this; sounds lively and fresh; sounds ready for T.V. to me. Good luck to you! D.B.

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Post by mr clean » Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:37 am

Hey Satish
I can't say whether or not it would work for that commercial but, It sounded like other stuff I have heard on commercials. I hope that helps. Good luck with it. And welcome!

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Re: Another oily oily submission!!!

Post by Satish » Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:51 am

cardell wrote:Welcome Satish,

I enjoyed that :)
but...I found the static sound at the start quite distracting. It sounds like it is intentional but to me it sounds bad.

Stuart
Hi Stuart, Thanks for the constructive criticism. I did think that myself after posting it for the deadline... i joined taxi a day before the due date and couldn't make that judgement call in my rush. Thanks again. CHeers, Satish/..

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Re: Another oily oily submission!!!

Post by Satish » Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:54 am

Hi all,
Thanks for all the positive comments you guys. Really appreciate you all taking the time out to listen. I heard all your submissions too and some fabulous stuff for this listing. Best of luck to all you as well. Cheers, Satish/..

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