This Is Your Song

almacisaac · Post by **almacisaac** » Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:15 am

Short on lyrics....but looking for feedback on an 'is it catchy' type of level....does it flow, does the arrangement work...any and all feedback greatly appreciated.

'This is your song' @ http://www.taxi.com/almacisaac

thokus · Post by **thokus** » Tue Mar 15, 2011 10:38 am

Wow Nice job .. Really cool mood setter... The onlything that was a bug for me was the abrupt end .. .maybe let it ring out a touch. Great song though .. Good luck with it
Tom

almacisaac · Post by **almacisaac** » Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:07 am

Thanks Thokus!!! I think i may have cut it off rather than fade it out when I was mixing it! I'm going to try and re-mix the ending so its not as abrupt.

glender · Post by **glender** » Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:48 pm

Very nice piece, great flow and vibe. The lyrics are really good too. I think it would fit into a movie real easy. Thanks for sharing, I'd rank this in the top 10% of what gets listed in these forums.

The cutoff ending is no good though, you need to change that.

good luck

almacisaac · Post by **almacisaac** » Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:09 am

thanks Glender, really appreciate the feedback & kind words! I think it needs a polish, and fix that ending fer sure!

almacisaac · Post by **almacisaac** » Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:58 am

tx again. I will re=polish and fix that cut ending fer sure.

kenmassey · Post by **kenmassey** » Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:14 pm

Hi Alan, I agree with the others a good song, like your style and keep it up you;ve got something good going on. Besides the obvious abrupt ending as mentioned, I did notice some hiss when the track began (maybe the compressor?) overall a good job! Keep it goin. Ken

almacisaac · Post by **almacisaac** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:34 am

Thanks Ken, appreciate the feedback!

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