Need some opinions

[brandonamatias]

Hey everyone,

Got a return on the listing:

D110519PR

HAPPY and OPTIMISTIC POP/ROCK INSTRUMENTALS a la Temper Traps “Sweet Disposition” etc., needed by a Highly Successful Commercial Advertising Music Company for the purpose of licensing in MANY infomercials. Quoted from the company: “Motivational, inspirational, pleasant, serene, light, and commercially viable tracks are what we are after. We do NOT want anything sad, dark, scary etc. Tracks in a major key would be best.

I want to see what you think and how I could have made this a forward

"Keep Your Head Up" at http://www.taxi.com/brandonamatias

Thanks for taking time to listen!

Brandon

[slowdance]

Brandon,

On first listen I thought that maybe the guitar and drums were both fighting for space...and if it (the song) was to be used in an infomercial and there would be a voice over it may not work well.......so I went to listen to Temper Traps' "Sweet Disposition".....and I thought you nailed the ala head on!.......All I can think of why it may have been held back is that there was some stiff competition on who would get the forwards....great job, I really liked it......

Regards,
Dick