I didn't catch the show yet.
Many pieces of music are good but not contemporary. They just need to be paired up with the right opportunity/listing.
This piece has some good stuff going on. One thing is the drum rhythm is a little unsettling early on. Also, don't forget that the no-vocal version, either whole or shorter could be marketable. Simple acoustic, some drums, and harmonica works well in lots of situations.
Again, I didn't catch the show and even if the reaction was a bit harsh, that reaction might be what you'd get from an industry pro *IF* you submitted for something that was supposed to sound contemporary.
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