Beach Boys for 60s?

[playagibson]

Very slick !!!
I was anticipating the predictable harmonies/ melodies and you gave it some original twists.
The qualities there. I hope it fits the listing.

Rich.

[rnrmachine]

You already know I liked it Paul!!! If ya got my reply to your PM that is hehe.

Just checked.. so ya didn't get my PM yet... but ya probably will until ya get here... lol

Rob

[pauleddymusic]

Many thanks for listening, folks! I took care of the nigglies you sent me in the PM, Rob. Thanks. Paul

[nick.moxsom]

Paul,

This is killer. Clever man, you've got the vibe and the arrangement down to a tee, imho. My only nit was whether the last line ("Where you walking to?') could be a little stronger... Maybe 'Can I walk with you?' or maybe just use 'going' in place of 'walking'. Just my opinion, of course.

Really enjoyed it, though, and it just HAS to be a forward at the very least. Good luck with it.

Nick

[pauleddymusic]

Hey Nick -

Strangely enough, it does alt between "where you" and "can I" during the fade out. Guess it's hard to pick up as it fades. But cool we had the same idea! I do agree it's kinda weak. The lower the notes got, the weaker my falsetto.

I've got so much respect for the music of the The Beach Boys! Nobody like 'em.

[Mark Crozer]

Wow!! I absolutely bloody love this Paul. It's fantastic. Such a great and authentic sound. Good luck with it. Not that you need it.

[dtrain1234]

Paul doesn't need luck, he's got it! lol. I like everything about this song. Sent you a PM Paul.

[stephencollins]

Really cool. Sounds more like Jan and Dean to me, but it's all good. Good luck. I think it should be picked up by someone.

Steve