It's raining Cats and Joggers (any/all feedback appreciated)

[simonsays]

Album: Enter Stellar Dreams
Song: It's Raining Cats and Joggers
Copyright Steve Simon 2011

(1st Verse)

1 It's raining cats and joggers
2 man, those updrafts are insane
3 still I didn't expect to see, right next to me
4 Mary Poppins and the Flyin' Nun
5 or Puss n' Boots wearin' rubber shoes
6 touchin' down in a pourin' rain

(Chorus)

1 callin' all bloggers
2 callin' all bloggers
3 It's cats and joggers
4 I repeat, cats and joggers
5 It's parasols and parasails
6 and a crazy cool cat, not going splat
7 in a prissy hissy hail

(2nd Verse)

1 It's raining cats and joggers
2 the storm report, warned of weirder weather
3 still a Disney downpour, right next to me?
4 I know a cat in flight, is a crazy sight
5 one hardly ever expects to view
6 but Witches and Nuns -- flying together? -- never!

(Repeat Chorus)

[AnthonyCeseri]

Hey - thanks for posting.

Maybe I'm missing something obvious, but can you explain the cats and joggers concept? I'd like to comment on your lyrics, but I'm not sure I understand the big picture yet...

thanks.

[simonsays]

Hi Again Anthony.

I'm afraid that there is no 'high concept' here. This is just a little whimsical piece I did. As I sometimes do ... I started with a cliche ( "It's raining cats and dogs", in this case ) ... and then tried to add an interesting twist. If you have any lyrics that you'd like some feedback on, please post them. I'm all for quid pro quo!

Steve (aka, SimonSays)

[AnthonyCeseri]

Hi Again Anthony.

I'm afraid that there is no 'high concept' here. This is just a little whimsical piece I did. As I sometimes do ... I started with a cliche ( "It's raining cats and dogs", in this case ) ... and then tried to add an interesting twist. If you have any lyrics that you'd like some feedback on, please post them. I'm all for quid pro quo!

Steve (aka, SimonSays)

haha.. gotcha, man - well that's cool. Thanks! I'll letcha know if I post something : )