Pop/Electro Work in progress

[OrionSatori]

This is a great song. I'm listening on really crappy ear buds, and it's still great. Good songwrinting/composition. I like the lead in the chorus, but the synth sounds a little dated. I would mess around with some presets or different synths and try to come up with a different tambre, but that's me. I'm also not too fond of the pitch correction. Sometimes, it can work and I'm not totally against it, but it just doesn't feel right. Almost like it's used to cover up a lot of problems with the singer's pitch than as a stylistic effect. Overall, great work, though.

Cheers for the input. Good points. The autotune basically is covering up the rough vocal at the moment.Vocals arent finished. Although I suspect we'll use it as an effect still when done properly. Ive done a new version and played with a new synth line. I know what you mean about the dated bit. If you get a chance would appreciate hearing if you think its an improvement.

Ta

Yeah, the synth sounds better. I like how it almost falls apart at the end of the riff with the vibrato.