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Post by feaker66 » Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:59 am

Dad's too tough on his son and he runs away.

Re wrote it and am almost done.

Will post in p-p soon.

New lyrics below

Sincerely

Paul

Runaway
I can still recall that night. It was such an awful fight
They were wrong and I was surely right.
Mama cried and daddy swore. Said they would not take no more
I packed up and headed out the door

prechorus
At 17 I knew it all. I was tired of my life
I knew I could make it on my own.
The city life dragged me down. I struggled day-to-day
But I made this choice, I couldn’t just go home

chorus
Runaway Where was I running to
Why’d I runaway? I didn’t think things through
Runaway So many times I cried
Why’d I runaway? It was just my foolish pride

Don’t know how, but a late night call put my sister at my door
From happiness I went to trembling fear
The look on her face said it all. Ya better sit down or you might fall
Mom and dad’s been gone almost a year

bridge
Heat and passion bad reaction… did a bad on me
Can’t go forward can’t go backward… where’m I sposed to be
Just can’t face it can’t erase it constant on my mind
So much fretting and regretting can’t go back in time

Run-a-way 2

My son is late, it’s two a.m. I’m burnin mad I’ll be yellin again
It’s happened before, I’ve lost control. It’s an ugly thing verse 1

Now its early morn, just a little first light verse 2
Gotta set him straight, gotta make things right
I opened the door,saw an empty bed, and the note that said, dad I’m leaving ta night

Oh my god… what have I gone and done c#....d prechorus

Run-a-way Where you runnin to chorus
Why’d you run-a-way, did you think this through?
Run-a-way You can’t make it alone
Why’d you run-a-way would you please just come home

He said I hate your rules and I don’t like school verse 3
You’re always in my face you know I need my space
You don’t like my friends You wanna know where I go
I’m not liking you dad and I can’t take it no more

I wanted my boy to turn out good. If I was strict, maybe he would Bm F#m Bridge
But he’s a sensitive kid, I shoulda know better Em C D gee eeeef#d
Thankfully, while growing old is compulsory, growing up remains optional!

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