Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

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Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Tue Sep 11, 2012 4:53 pm

I've got a real Bluesy, Country song called, "She's Got Nothin On You". My Mom swears it's gonna be a big hit (Moms ain't prejudiced at all). But, I can't play Blues. I do have it recorded Acapella.
Anybody interested in a collaboration?

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by mojobone » Thu Sep 13, 2012 10:33 am

Those genres are my specialty; I'd be glad to take a listen to what you've got.
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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Sat Sep 15, 2012 4:33 pm

Okay, Mojo.
I finally got it to download at http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/walter327 .
It's the 6th song on the playlist and, I apologize, was recorded on a handheld recorder. I think you'll get the gist, though.


Copyright 2007 by Walter W. Comer
through WWOCR.

She's Got Nothin' On You

Vs.-Look at that lady
walkin' down the street
She's a red hot number
set upon two feet,
Oh, I like those
high-heeled shoes
But, she's got nothin' on you,
Strawberry blond hair
flowin' down her back
Man, let me tell ya
she's all that,
Thinkin' what I'm thinkin'
I must be a fool
"Cause she's got nothin' on you,
Chorus:
The most beautiful woman
that God ever made
You come into the room
and my breath goes away,
She might look good
in her skirt and high-heeled shoes
But, she's got nothin' on you
No, Baby, she's go nothin' on you
Vs.-Look at that lady
swayin' as she walks
Long legs underneath
her frame so tall,
She drives a rag-top 'Vette that's
painted blue
But, she's got nothin' on you
Bridge:
(This part is iffy. I have an idea. But, it's copyrighted like this)
I wouldn't trade a moment
that I have with you for her
In all of my hard lessons
I have finally learned,
Some think the grass is greener
the way they always do
But, they're not in love like me
No way, She's got nothin' on you

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walter w. comer

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:06 pm

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by mojobone » Mon Oct 15, 2012 10:26 am

Sorry, been a bit inattentive lately, for um, personal reasons. I'll have a listen.
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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by mojobone » Mon Oct 15, 2012 10:32 am

You have a PM, Walt! :D
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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:51 am

Pardon my ignorance. For the life of me I can't conjure up what PM means, para-military, post mortem, pond muck! :D

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by Rutherford » Sat Nov 24, 2012 1:54 pm

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Mon Dec 03, 2012 12:16 pm

DUH!! Now, I feel really dumb! :shock:

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Re: Bluesy, Country song. Wrong talent!

Post by walter529 » Mon Dec 31, 2012 8:45 am

Oh! By the by. I do have an E-mail: wkcomer@yahoo.com.

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