New Pop song I finally finished writing!

[jcapp88]

Hi everyone,
I just finished up a track that I will be submitting for a songwriting competition and also various Taxi posts. The competition deadline is by the end of this week, so any feedback helps!

Since this is a songwriting forum, any comments on the writing are very helpful. I'm mostly wondering how the vocal sits and where it needs to be pulled forward or back more. Also any comments on the mix itself , or any general comments are greatly appreciated!

Also, would you put this in the Pop or Dance/Electronica category?

Here's the link:

https://soundcloud.com/satellitesurviva ... run-c-2013


Thank you guys in advance!

Joe

[ronnie35]

hey Joe I know its been a while but I wanted to hear your song but sound cloud would'nt go through
Ron

[andygabrys]

https://soundcloud.com/satellitesurviva ... n-c-2013-1

[jcapp88]

Thanks Andy! That's the right link. If anyone sees this now, I'm having a female vocalist sing this track for the actual release - should turn out great!