New Pop song I finally finished writing!

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New Pop song I finally finished writing!

Post by jcapp88 » Wed May 29, 2013 11:42 am

Hi everyone,
I just finished up a track that I will be submitting for a songwriting competition and also various Taxi posts. The competition deadline is by the end of this week, so any feedback helps!

Since this is a songwriting forum, any comments on the writing are very helpful. I'm mostly wondering how the vocal sits and where it needs to be pulled forward or back more. Also any comments on the mix itself , or any general comments are greatly appreciated!

Also, would you put this in the Pop or Dance/Electronica category?

Here's the link:

https://soundcloud.com/satellitesurviva ... run-c-2013


Thank you guys in advance!

Joe

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Re: New Pop song I finally finished writing!

Post by ronnie35 » Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:41 pm

hey Joe I know its been a while but I wanted to hear your song but sound cloud would'nt go through
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Re: New Pop song I finally finished writing!

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Re: New Pop song I finally finished writing!

Post by jcapp88 » Mon Aug 19, 2013 12:08 pm

Thanks Andy! That's the right link. If anyone sees this now, I'm having a female vocalist sing this track for the actual release - should turn out great!

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