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[JTM]

Here's the listing:
PLAYFUL CHILDREN'S SONGS in the sing-a-long style of "The Wheels On The Bus," "Skip To My Lou," "Pop! Goes The Weasel," etc., are needed by the Owner of an Independent Children's Label for a number of compilation albums. QUOTING THE OWNER: "We're not looking for educational songs, but original songs that children can have fun and dance to. The age range should be between 3-7 years old." They're looking for Mid-to-Up Tempo songs that can hold the interest of a youngster. Your production must be clear and focused, with an inviting vocal performance. Sleepy time lullabies are not needed for this pitch.

Here's my song, Mama's Muffins:
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single ... d=12498807

I appreciated any comments on the song, arrangement, performance, recording, mixing, or other.

Thanks!
JTM

[HectorRContreras]

Dear JTM,

We really like the Song, : "Mamas Muffins". It is light, simple, and we can visualize little Children dancing happily on this.
The Tempo is not too fast, and very relevant it is because 3 to 7 year old Children cannot dance very fast most of the time.

But the Lyrics is about Mama cooking Muffins today, ... actually you could be very lucky that they are precisely looking for a "Food" Song to include in the Album, and that way you will be called for a Deal. Wishing you the best.

[JTM]

Thanks, Hector (and sometimes Catherine!). I appreciate the feedback. All the best!
JTM