Here is the listing I wrote this for.
A sleek, modern, contemporary REGGAE Song is needed by an iconic luxury automobile brand for their next TV Commercial. Bob Marley's "Get Up Stand Up," "One Love," or "Wonderful World, Beautiful People" by Jimmy Cliff all give you a hint as to the kind of Simple, Universal LYRIC HOOK they need. But, for this TV spot, they're looking for the rhythm track to be MUCH more sexy, sleek, and contemporary than those old school classics. Break out the polish for this pitch!
Could you deftly blend in some Hip Hop or EDM elements with your Reggae? Maybe! Could you try some really cool, dreamy, ethereal synth sounds? Probably! Should you imagine what contemporary Reggae would sound like if done by a cool, super hip, contemporary-sounding composer/producer? Yes! Then add a simple, positive, one-idea lyric hook to polish it off, and you could very well have what they need!
Maybe a lyric hook about feeling free, feeling great, flying, loving life, and/or car attributes like strength, power, etc. ... Think about how driving this awesome new car would make you feel. Then think about what the well-monied, handsome 43-year-old guy and his gorgeous wife (the target demographic) would listen to when they're in the mood for some Reggae. Sting comes to mind, but you should probably go even more contemporary than that!
Please don't submit anything with lyric themes that are political (sorry Mr. Marley) or sexist. Sexy is good. Speed is good. Rising up against the establishment, "Not so good, mon."
They really want a laid back, relaxed feel for this spot, so we recommend a tempo in the ballpark of 78 BPM. They're going to be juxtaposing super slow-motion shots of beautiful images with the song. Quoting the source: "There will be NO voice over dialogue, so the simple lyric hook of your song is going to have to be a huge selling point for this brand."
The estimated fee for this commercial is $15,000. This placement will be direct-to-the brand with no agency involved, so you'll keep 100% ownership of your Copyright and Master. You'll also get 100% of the creative fee and any applicable performance royalties. You must own or control 100% of the Master and Copyright to pitch for this opportunity. Please do NOT copy or rip off the referenced artists in any way, shape, or form. Broadcast Quality is needed (great sounding home recordings are fine). All songs will be screened on a Yes/No basis. No full critiques. Please submit 1-3 songs no later than Monday, December 16th at 9:30am (PST). TAXI #U131216RG
Here are my lyrics: (My extra comments are in brackets.)
Verse:
You are my precious jewel. How you make me smile. (Could be about the car or the person sitting next to you)
You deserve the very best. Sit back. Enjoy the ride.
Pre chorus:
We've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing you could want. (First hook for the car company. Car has it all.)
We've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing you could want. (The couple has it all because they own THIS car.)
Chorus:
Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful. (Second Hook. Life is beautiful when you are driving THIS car.)
You are my darling angel. You're such a tease. (Could be referring to the car or the person in the seat next to you)
Kiss me with those sweet lips won't you pretty please. (could be metaphorical for attraction to the car/give me some sugar car...or about the person next to you. The attraction and love the couple have for each other built the life and wealth that allows them to afford THIS luxury vehicle.)
Pre chorus:
We've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing you could want.
We've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing, we've got ev-er-y-thing you could want.
Chorus:
Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful...Life is beautiful.
Okay. There you have my attempt at this listing. I also have the melodies. Am I on track? Does anyone want to demo this over the weekend for 50/50 split?
Anybody need $7500?
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL
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Re: LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL
It's back to the old drawing board for me.
Maybe they'll extend the listing and then I'll have time to do a proper demo?
Or, maybe they'll be another listing similar to this one in the future! Yeah! 



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