Feedback for my songs

[TheFates]

Hi everyone,

Would love your feedback for my two songs "Shelter" www.soundcloud.com/the-fates/shelter and "Partner in Crime" www.soundcloud.com/the-fates/partner-in-crime. Lyrics below

SHELTER
When you’re alone
Wondering where you went wrong then
the rain falls and thunder comes along
Just let me know
I’ll take you home

No question you’re independent
No longer a little child
But, sometimes life is so damn wild
And gets you riled
Just let me know
And we’ll just go

Up high, up to the stars, up to the sky
I know a different side of you
And I know that you know I like what I see

But, this ain’t about me
It’s about the place where you can go and flee and just be
A place called home
A place you know
Maybe it has walls or you’ll find it in my arms
Either way, it keeps you safe away from harm
Just let me know
I’ll take you home
Take you to shelter

On the nights
When you call out and no one replies
Those nights when you want to cut all ties
Just let me know
I’ll take you home
Always searching for heaven in far off galaxies
There’s one here on Earth you must trust and believe
Just let me know
And there we’ll go

Up high, up to the stars, up to the sky
Perhaps there you’ll find your truth
And I know that you know that’s when you’ll be free

repeat chorus

PARTNER IN CRIME
Ooooooooh (2x)

Place your healing hands
upon my aching heart
Lift my head, fix my smile
before it gets too dark
Massage these cabled muscles
correct my mangled spine
so I may straighten up
if you’re up for it
that would you make you my

Partner in crime
Say you’ll be mine

Please don’t run away (2x)
Release me from this place
Take me away
Please take me away
Before I go insane (2x)

I wouldn't risk your safety
and on my life, I swear
That the jail that I dwell is self-sentenced
I’m the one who put me here
But, with this here pencil
I’m drawing up a plan
A life free of demands

Who knows if we will take this far
Just a question if we love each other
And hate being apart
It wouldn't cross my mind
To not want you by my side
Choice is yours

Say you’ll be mine
Partner in crime

Please don't run away (2x)
Release me from this pain
Take me away
Please take me away
Before I go insane
Take me away
Please take me away
Before I go insane
Take me away
Please take me away
Before I go insane (2x)

[RockChild56]

Hey Fates,
You may want to post this in the Peer 2 Peer section of these forums. Also get a bit more specific.
Ask the folks what you want feedback about most.
FWIW Great Vocals/Harmonies esp. on "Partner In Crime".

I wish Y'all the best,

EJB

[TheFates]

Thank you RockChild!