Is this pop instrumental?

[Anders]

All comments and suggestions are welcome

Thanks!
/Anders

My track, Higher grounds:
https://soundcloud.com/akysound/higher-grounds/s-pRu42

CONTEMPORARY POP INSTRUMENTALS are needed by the Creative Director of a Top-Tier Music Licensing Company with an incredible list of amazing placements in Blockbuster Films and top TV shows. They want innovative, current, Mid-to-Up-Tempo Instrumentals in the stylistic wheelhouse of hit makers like Dr. Luke (Ke$ha, Jessie J, Katy Perry), Cirkut (Britney Spears, Rihanna, Taylor Swift), Max Martin (P!nk, Maroon 5, Ellie Goulding), etc., etc., etc. Give them super strong, full-length Instrumentals with fresh beats that are rhythmically engaging, a radio-friendly structure, and great melodic hooks. Do NOT copy or rip off the referenced Producers in any way, shape, or form. Use their hits only as a general guide for feel, texture, tone, and vibe. Broadcast quality is needed (great sounding home recordings are fine). This company offers an EXCLUSIVE deal, so please be sure the Instrumentals you submit to this are NOT already signed with any other Libraries or Catalogs. Any sync fees will be split 50/50 with the Company. You'll keep 100% of the Writer's share, and the company will get 100% of the Publisher's share. You must own or control your Master and Copyright to submit. Please submit one to three Instrumentals online or per CD. All submissions will be screened on a Yes/No basis by a TAXI screener handpicked by the Company - No full critiques. Submissions must be received no later than Saturday, June 27, 2015. TAXI #Y150627PI

[Joseph]

It's good, I think it's just lacking energy. Try making it faster and put the kick on all quarter notes.

-Joseph

[Anders]

Thank you Joseph!

Sounds like a good idea, I will try that...

/Anders

[Anders]

I decided not to submit this time.
It needs more work, I´m saving it for a similar listing...

/Anders

[ottlukk]

For what it's worth, I was also looking for a faster tempo. Ott