$5 return - $125k critique

[daveydad]

Well, just for fun, thought I'd give the big one a shot... didn't make it. But screener critique below was very helpful for future use. So hopefully it will fit the "home improvement, laundry or baby product" niche one day! Kite Flite was the track:

https://soundcloud.com/davidhollandsworth/kite-flite

Hi David, I love this track for the right listing. I think it definitely has a great "contemporary" "commercial" advertising sound but I find that there is a sweetness and lightness here that goes in a different direction than the requested "energetic" tracks requested. I think that this could work great for home improvement, laundry or baby product commercials but I worry that it is too feminine and quirky to underscore a "beer" commercial where people are playing "glow in the dark frisbee".

[Paulie]

Screener better look out for the PC Police. At my last job, sending that message was literally grounds for termination. #TheWorldWeLiveInToday