Heart-Shaped Song

[good4somethingbum]

Heart-Shaped Song ©2016 Robert George BMI

Remember our honeymoon near Frisco Bay
It was after sunset when we left that Greek café
A misty rain had wet the cobblestones
We took a walk and down the block we heard a saxophone
As the moon hung high above the Golden Gate
We were kissing in a doorway as a jazzman played

A heart-shaped song
And it was like forever sang along
Our spirits slowly melted into one
And that kiss felt like it was sculpted from
A heart-shaped song

Now although we haven’t been back there in years
It’s as though that music never disappeared
Cos at night I lay my head upon your breast
And we’re walking in a soft rain way out west
Honey, we’ll remain eternally in love
Cos when we make love I feel the rhythm of

A heart-shaped song
And it’s as if forever sings along
Our spirits slowly melting into one
And our kiss feels just like it’s sculpted from
A heart-shaped song

Yes, a heart-shaped song
And it’s as if forever sings along
Our spirits slowly melting into one
And our kiss feels just like it’s sculpted from
A heart-shaped song

A heart-shaped song
A heart-shaped song…

[burpo]

I like that line
"And our kiss feels just like it’s sculpted from a heart-shaped song."

I think it would be cool to vary the fourth line of the chorus each time.

The meter changes, which is very Hal David/Burt Baharach, not necessarily a bad teeng.

Good work, thus far!!

-b

[good4somethingbum]

Thanks burpo. The meter should be the same through out. The kength of the lines change slightly and there's an inner rhyme in vs. 1.