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Awake All Night

Post by mikeShort » Wed Dec 07, 2016 8:03 am

I think this song is "done," but it hasn't been recorded, so it can still be made strong. What say you all?
Awake All Night
by Michael B. Short © 2016

Lying awake
Staring at the ceiling
There are a couple a cracks
That should have been repaired
Watching the fan
Spellbound by the spinning
Listening intenttly
For your step on the stair

Chorus
Tangled in the covers
Tender to the touch
I can't sleep
I'm dreaming too much
It's always been so easy for you
To keep me awake all night

Lost in your arms
Trying to get closer
Drowning in the moment
Then coming up for air
Watching you breathe
I'm one with the rhythm
Never letting go
As I silently stare

Chorus

Bridge
If the ceiling's still there I don't see it
And the fan could fly away into the wild blue
If I never sleep again
If I'm awake for every moment
It's a price that I will pay
To dream about you

Chorus
Mike

"It's not bad. It's just not DONE."
The tall member of 2Late (http://www.2lateonline.com)

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