Thank you #386..return with good critique.

[Tunesmith]

It was a good critique, " It doesn't create the feel that this listing is looking for.... You establish a melody which is good. A different harmonic choice would have been better to create the fun feel that they are looking for. Also developing the piece more would have made it more interesting and less redundant. The sound quality is good., well recorded"..

I must say the part about the sound made me happy as I am using vintage gear!! (upgrading is in process)

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ORIGINAL ACOUSTIC LIGHT-HEARTED INSTRUMENTALS are needed for a $2,000, Direct-to-Ad Agency placement in a Fashion-Related Commercial. They're specifically looking for Up-Tempo Instrumentals, and it's our observation that the thing all the references have in common is a very rhythmic strumming pattern on the acoustic guitar and a buoyant overall vibe.

Here is the track:

https://soundcloud.com/lindacullum/happ ... -strumming

I'd love to hear what was forwarded!

Best,
Linda C