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2 Country Lyrics

Post by tresero » Thu May 02, 2019 8:07 am

Wondering what you all think of either of these. I'm deciding which one to demo and only have the budget for one. On a side note, these have already been demo'd though it was long ago, and I had some interest in one of them (won't say which so I don't influence you), but wanted an updated arrangement.

As always, thanks in advance!

If I Had A Dime
Why do I love you when you treat me like you do
everybody wonders just what I see in you
Why can't I just walk out and tell you that we're through?
Cause when you finally get to lovin' me there ain't no one but you

If I had a dime for every time you cheated
If I had a dime each time I was mistreated
If I had a dime every time you didn't care
Then honey, I'd be a multimillionaire

Why do I let you walk over me
Why can't I tell you to give me back the key
Why don't I change my number and then you couldn't call
Cause I'd rather love you now and then, then not love you at all

Chorus

Why do I let you break my heart in two
Why do I cry each night that I'm missing you
Why do I take you back when you play around
Cause when you finally get to lovin' me I'm the richest girl in town

Chorus

Misery Loves Company
Verse
Last call for the evenin’, closin’ time again
Let me buy you one more for the road.
Tell me ‘bout your sorrows and I’ll help relieve your pain
Cause I can tell that you’ve been hurtin’ too.

Chorus
Misery Loves Company that’s why I’m here with you.
Together we could soak up all these blues.
Misery Loves Company and I don’t mind the misery,
as long as the company is you.

Verse
You’ve been so warm and friendly, we’ve talked away our tears.
I was hopin’ I could take you home.
I promise to be gentle and help you when I can.
Maybe we can start up something new

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Re: 2 Country Lyrics

Post by johnnyrowing » Thu May 02, 2019 11:30 am

I would choose Misery Loves Company.
Those lyrics feel like a setup that pays off with a fresh take on a cliche.
I really like the lines "Misery Loves Company and I don’t mind the misery, as long as the company is you."

The other lyrics feel like a setup that pays off with just a cliche.

I hope that proves helpful in some way.

Best wishes. :)

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Re: 2 Country Lyrics

Post by tresero » Thu May 02, 2019 11:19 pm

johnnyrowing wrote:
Thu May 02, 2019 11:30 am
I would choose Misery Loves Company.
Those lyrics feel like a setup that pays off with a fresh take on a cliche.
I really like the lines "Misery Loves Company and I don’t mind the misery, as long as the company is you."

The other lyrics feel like a setup that pays off with just a cliche.

I hope that proves helpful in some way.

Best wishes. :)
Thanks Johnny!

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Re: 2 Country Lyrics

Post by SquareBiz » Sun May 05, 2019 9:09 am

I love "If I had a dime"...I think that's a hit!

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Re: 2 Country Lyrics

Post by tresero » Sun May 05, 2019 11:07 am

SquareBiz wrote:
Sun May 05, 2019 9:09 am
I love "If I had a dime"...I think that's a hit!
Thanks!

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