This month I thought I'd try something just for an experiment. It just so happened that after I had submitted to two listings that some of my material was picked up for Advertisers and a prominent sports provider.
This was also the material that I submitted to Taxi's listings. They, of course were returned for one reason or another, as I had surmised.
1st - Y190920TV - Listener #416
"Nice job, fun listen" was picked up for all the reasons you did not give. Repetition is what a supervisor wants to not get in the way of the overlaying scene or action. Not all examples followed your rule of " Needs more developmental and dynamic arc.... less repetition." It was selected as a full song with lyrics; thought I'd try it as a instrumental. Maybe the lyrics helped. I dunno.
2nd - Y190921ED - Listener #406
"Nice start. You might get closer to the high energy EDM style that this listing requested by starting with a more driving kick at a faster tempo, Also would think about replacing some of your moodier sounds with bright energetic forward moving rhythmic parts."
I am Trying not to be just like a mold of just one cue. EDM has many different elements as the provider whom asked for this material gave us more examples. "A List" was one of the first selected. "Geared One" was also selected.
Again, I know that music is subjective as are all of us people, but it seems when I am sure of a submission, a different point of view is given by one of these screeners. Almost seems as though they want to 'educate' rather than examine the possibility that maybe they could be wrong about what they hear.

I still am a proponent of the process, just would like minds open rather than "staying within the lines" so to speak. D.