Patriotic/Country song - collaboration

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Patriotic/Country song - collaboration

Post by funsongs » Tue Oct 08, 2019 5:46 pm

It started like this:
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And today's rendering sounds like this: (updated 10-12-19)



Thanks to Irwin & jay for accepting my offer to join the party...

QUESTION IS: is this TAXI Road Rally listening panel or pitch-worthy as-is?

In advance - thanks for your time & ears.
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Re: Patriotic/Country song - collaboration

Post by DannyWeber » Thu Oct 10, 2019 8:40 pm

Man.. this one keeps getting better!
I love the way you use minor and major chords respectively, to bring out resolution in the lyric!

I think it's great, Peter.. you should definitely pitch this wherever you can for this genre! Great playing and I love the Slide Guitar!
Upbeat and positive.. works for me!!

One little note.. when you change to that major chord on the word free.. it sounds a little choppy on the transition. The transition to the minor chord sounds pretty good but the major.. sounds a bit edited and not really smooth. Might be a matter of timing, it seems to me. It's close but I may be being a little nit-picky too. I hope not!

Just trying to help!
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Re: Patriotic/Country song - collaboration

Post by funsongs » Sat Oct 12, 2019 12:54 pm

Thanks Dan - I think we'll leave it as-is... at least for now.
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