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She's So Sweet

Post by irwin » Thu Nov 07, 2019 1:16 am

This original song I wrote after an idea came to me, so I just follow it up. I happen to complete the lyric and now would love to hear some comments and suggests as to structure, especially the chorus. any general thoughts very much welcome.


She's So Sweet
©2019 Irwin Abrigo

(Chorus)
She so sweet her eyes, are so lovely
when she speaks Like violin, her voice sounds so sweet to me
when she smiles with me, I couldn't believe that it was real
She left a picture in my memory, And I love her so, But she doesn't know

(V1)
She'd passes my way it was a lovely day
She was looking for direction that cause my love and affection
When she looked into my eyes and started asking questions
she didn't know what she'd done that day When she'd left and gone away

(Chorus)
She so sweet her eyes, are so lovely
when she speaks Like violin, her voice sounds so sweet to me
when she smiles with me, I couldn't believe that it was real
She left a picture in my memory, And I love her so, But she doesn't know

(V2)
You'll say I'm insane, for her I'll take that blame
I don't know her name or number, So baby if you do remember
In that moment that we'd share, why don't you come and talk to me
This feeling I'm feeling inside, Is only you can bring a relief

(Chorus)
She so sweet her eyes, are so lovely
when she speaks Like violin, her voice sounds so sweet to me
when she smiles with me, I couldn't believe that it was real
She left a picture in my memory, And I love her so, But she doesn't know

(Bridge)
Now She's the only girl, in this whole wide world
that I'm thinking of
Now She's the only one, In this whole wide world
That I think I love, She's the only girl that I'm thinking of

(Chorus)

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