Appreciate any feedback on this pandemic-type song. Responsive to listings like (e.g.) TAXI # S200521HF, which are looking for heartfelt songs with lyric themes about hope, or strength or heroism. Thanks in advance for your thoughts. Paul
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Beautiful song Paul!
My opinion is it fits the listing nicely. Vocalist is awesome too! Well done. Best, John
My opinion is it fits the listing nicely. Vocalist is awesome too! Well done. Best, John
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Very solid sonically! Vocals are very good. The lyrics are not as strong and the melody could use more tension but very impressive!
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Im not finding that listing number, so just some off the cuff comments with the disclaimer that I know nothing! 
Vocals sound great, lovely double tracking, intonation and all seems good to me. Reminding me of Sufjan Stevens a bit in places. Piano could use a few flourishes here and there to create some interest. A bit more build in the ending instrumentation might also benefit the piece.
Vocals sound great, lovely double tracking, intonation and all seems good to me. Reminding me of Sufjan Stevens a bit in places. Piano could use a few flourishes here and there to create some interest. A bit more build in the ending instrumentation might also benefit the piece.
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