Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

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Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by tresero » Tue Sep 15, 2020 5:48 pm

Well, even though one of the two tracks got forwarded, I'm still wondering WTF is going on with the generic stiff or in this case, live sounding.

I don't use samples, and I there is no quantizing. The drums are 100% acoustic and live as well as the guitar. The piano and vibes are live, but midi to record, again, not quantized.

I'm just venting, but both tunes had the same notes, Faithful was rejected for the piano solo, but the same comment about live feeling.

"I think this needs more of a live sounding groove, but the arrangement, instrumentation, and feel are still pretty good."

My guitar playing isn't that good that it can be mistaken for a quantized loop ;)

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Re: Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by Robertj64 » Tue Sep 15, 2020 6:23 pm

Wow...I love both tracks. Isn't this the second time they did this to you? Both tracks should have been forwarded not just one. What an enjoyable listen. Something is going on with the screeners. No reason that this should not have been forwarded.

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Re: Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by tresero » Tue Sep 15, 2020 7:07 pm

Robertj64 wrote:
Tue Sep 15, 2020 6:23 pm
Wow...I love both tracks. Isn't this the second time they did this to you? Both tracks should have been forwarded not just one. What an enjoyable listen. Something is going on with the screeners. No reason that this should not have been forwarded.

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Thanks Robert. I get the solo thing, maybe, but the live feel? Nope.

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Re: Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by lesmac » Tue Sep 15, 2020 7:42 pm

The track that didn't make it seemed jumpy and overly busy especially in the intro. It felt like everyone was doing their own thing rhythmically. I didn't know who's time to follow..

Maybe try muting the drums and the rhythm guitar in that section.

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Re: Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by Robertj64 » Wed Sep 16, 2020 5:54 am

lesmac wrote:
Tue Sep 15, 2020 7:42 pm
The track that didn't make it seemed jumpy and overly busy especially in the intro. It felt like everyone was doing their own thing rhythmically. I didn't know who's time to follow..

Maybe try muting the drums and the rhythm guitar in that section.
I couldn't disagree more. This is what Jazz is. It has to sound a bit improvisational and how does this fit in with what the screener said. What would muting the drums benefit?

Sorry Les but this track is fine the way it is. Your comments do not seem to mesh with what the screener said: "I think this needs more of a live sounding groove, but the arrangement, instrumentation, and feel are still pretty good." I think this is a perfect example of how anyone can find any one thing that is wrong with a track.

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Re: Beating a dead horse (stiff etc.)

Post by tresero » Wed Sep 16, 2020 6:18 am

lesmac wrote:
Tue Sep 15, 2020 7:42 pm
The track that didn't make it seemed jumpy and overly busy especially in the intro. It felt like everyone was doing their own thing rhythmically. I didn't know who's time to follow..

Maybe try muting the drums and the rhythm guitar in that section.
I think you made my point. How could it not be "live" feeling if the timing isn't perfect?

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